I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tuesday, 20 October 2020
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ondreous and I go to Paihia School.
I liked your post about facts about camels because it was really interesting to read , and it had heaps of information that I didn’t know and I would have never knew that camels live up to 40 and 50 years . My sisters and cousin have been on a camel before in Australia with my Nana and Papa. Did you learn something interesting?
Keep up the good work
Kia ora Ngariama my name is Stilly and i'm a year 8 from Paihia School. I really like your blog post you have made about your Camel Facts. I really like your facts about camels and I think they are interesting. Did you know the reason why camels have long eyelashes is so the sand doesn't get into their eyes. Your blog post is great, keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteDo you know what a baby camel is called?
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ReplyDeleteHi Ngaraima, my name is Yazmin and I’m a year six student at Paihia School. I enjoyed reading your post about camel facts, I found it really interesting. I’ve never learnt about camels before so you taught me alot. I learnt that there’s two types of camels.
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Kia ora Ngaraima, my name is Mikaila and I am a year seven student from Paihia School. I really enjoyed reading your blog post about camel facts because I learned that camels can live up to 40 to 50 years which is a really long time for a camel and I also learned that there are two types of camels. I thought this was really interesting to read. I have never learned anything about camels until I read your blog post about camels.
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Kia ora, Ngaraima, my name is Tiana and I’m a year six at Paihia School. I really like your post about your Camel Facts because it had a lot of details and colorful backgrounds. I never knew that camels can live up to 50 years. Do you know what camels eat?
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Hi my name is Liam i am from paraoa school. i really like your facts about camels. my favourite fact that you said was camels have a thick lips which let them forage for thamy plants other animalscan't eat. keep making good post!
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